This is *stunningly* good holy shit the way you write Chirrut and his senses and how flustered they both get around each other and that adorable with an edge of sexy as fuck kiss and GOD. DAMN. Your writing is marvelous and my fave line was, "The only thing that makes Chirrut hesitate is how ludicrous it seems, because he’s never known Baze to have difficulty in expressing himself. Which just means that Chirrut has a long, long way to go when it comes to knowing Baze Malbus." I love that, how we know it's going to develop into an unbreakable bond but right now it's sweet and puppyish and aaaaaaaaah it's so delightful! My only complaint, is that you didn't put this in the fills post! ;)
Re: FILL: The Hot Springs Episode (2/2) - Chirrut/Baze - Onsen/Hot Spring Pools/Nude bathing